haiku without a parachute

lying on the ground
falling from 10,000 feet
hurts so very much

8 thoughts on “haiku without a parachute”

Pleats and Keats says:

This is perfect!

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March 15, 2016 at 9:39 am Reply
Pratishtha says:

Amazing!

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March 15, 2016 at 11:54 am Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  Thanks.
  
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  March 15, 2016 at 12:07 pm Reply
listentothebabe says:

Now that’s a fucking haiku

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March 15, 2016 at 5:36 pm Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  🙂
  
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  March 15, 2016 at 7:13 pm Reply
charliezero1.wordpress.com says:

Awesome! Haiku. yes! 🙂

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March 17, 2016 at 2:18 pm Reply
Isolated_girl says:

perfect!!! n creative!!
: ))

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March 23, 2016 at 11:06 am Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  Hey, thanks a lot!
  
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  March 23, 2016 at 11:10 am Reply

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