The Cherry

February 9, 2016March 22, 2022 Jason Preupoem, poetry, writing, you never forget your first time

Pit,
liked a clenched fist,
sticks
deep within your throat.

So
there, it slowly
grows
roots that only know

how to grip and choke.

10 thoughts on “The Cherry”

Marissa Bergen says:

Ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-cherry bomb!

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February 9, 2016 at 9:02 am Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  Hello dad! Hello mom!
  
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  February 9, 2016 at 9:07 am Reply
Smartculture says:

nice piece…..very creative.

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February 9, 2016 at 10:22 am Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  Thanks for reading. Appreciate your comment.
  
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  February 9, 2016 at 10:38 am Reply
  1. Smartculture says:
    
    You welcome…I’m also a poet and you can check out my blog @ smart2victor.wordpress.com..Thank you
    
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    February 9, 2016 at 11:37 am Reply
Sofia Kioroglou says:

Love it!

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February 9, 2016 at 12:16 pm Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  1,000,000 thank yous!
  
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  February 9, 2016 at 1:12 pm Reply
charliezero1.wordpress.com says:

Intensely visual and I picture the fit clenching the throat. What inspired this poem by you?

P.S Sorry about yesterday. I had to change to name. oh! and you asked how’s my chapbook coming along? I’m still working on a few things. I’m changing things around to further complete my work. But, It’s going. 🙂

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February 10, 2016 at 11:49 am Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  good good. interesting question on the inspiration for this one. i think i just wanted to rhyme pit and stick.
  
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  February 10, 2016 at 1:33 pm Reply
  1. charliezero1.wordpress.com says:
    
    Excellent! I like the way you think. 🙂
    
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    February 10, 2016 at 3:25 pm Reply