An Ocean Not to Break*


*this and “terrible love” i ganked from The National

An Ocean Not to Break*

16 thoughts on “An Ocean Not to Break*

  1. Ok I finally accept the place for concrete poetry. I have been very resistant. I particularly like the expanding sun, I think that is the first example that actually made me feel something due to the layout of the letters. Lovely

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  2. I could see the small wave or the peak of the larger wave right away, before I read anything on the page. I can also see the number two, don’t know if that means anything – it seems to be in the movement of the larger wave. This movement of the wave adds so much more meaning to the poem.

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