Ok I finally accept the place for concrete poetry. I have been very resistant. I particularly like the expanding sun, I think that is the first example that actually made me feel something due to the layout of the letters. Lovely
I could see the small wave or the peak of the larger wave right away, before I read anything on the page. I can also see the number two, don’t know if that means anything – it seems to be in the movement of the larger wave. This movement of the wave adds so much more meaning to the poem.
Jason Preu 
And of course you already know that I love it 😉
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been listening to high violet all morn
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I also like “Trouble will Find Me”
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that entire record and the boxer, too, resonate with me.
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Love it.
I think I’ve used a line from The National in a story, but I can’t remember which one…
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track ‘er down and link it up! it’s “national inspired by the national day”!
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Found it. I’d forgotten about the weird one: https://sonyca.wordpress.com/2015/02/16/wall-to-wall-to-wall-to-wall/
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You may enjoy my Playlist 🙂
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snap! thank ya hard for this.
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This is awesome! I love the old-fashion poetry that’s rhyming and rhythmic. This, however, is one of the few free verses that have enamored me.
C.
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Excellent! Thank you for reading and leaving some feedback.
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Ok I finally accept the place for concrete poetry. I have been very resistant. I particularly like the expanding sun, I think that is the first example that actually made me feel something due to the layout of the letters. Lovely
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whether this makes you feel anything or not, it’s interesting as hell: http://www.ucalgary.ca/utoday/issue/2015-03-04/tfdls-visualization-studio-enhances-appreciation-visual-poetry?utm_source=UToday&utm_medium=Email&utm_campaign=March-4-2015&utm_term=TFDL%27s%20Visualization%20Studio%20enhances%20appreciation%20of%20visual%20poetry
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That would make an amazing tattoo.
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I could see the small wave or the peak of the larger wave right away, before I read anything on the page. I can also see the number two, don’t know if that means anything – it seems to be in the movement of the larger wave. This movement of the wave adds so much more meaning to the poem.
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Oh yes, this is goooooood. I think concrete poetry may be “your thing”.
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