Twilight (mercifully, vampire-free)

Some flash fiction of mine published by the good folks of 101fiction.com for their Issue #7, with a theme of “green.”

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9 thoughts on “Twilight (mercifully, vampire-free)”

art.pen says:

“Soon, a rolling wall of emerald fire follows, incinerating the bungalow, porch swing, and two half-empty glasses of warm, honey-lemon, iced tea.”
I loved this ending! And a great story!! 🙂

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March 1, 2015 at 10:42 am Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  Awesome! Thanks for reading.
  
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  March 1, 2015 at 11:20 am Reply
Donna says:

Great ending

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March 1, 2015 at 1:27 pm Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  Thanks for reading. That sentence took some real wrangling.
  
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  March 1, 2015 at 4:14 pm Reply
  1. Donna says:
    
    Simple but honest
    
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    March 1, 2015 at 4:23 pm Reply
Sonya says:

I love the atmosphere of gentle doom you’ve created. It reminded me a bit of Ray Bradbury’s “There Will Come Soft Rains”.

Vampire-free twilight is my favourite kind, by the way 😀

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March 1, 2015 at 3:09 pm Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  What a compliment, thanks. “Gentle doom” is a great description of aging.
  
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  March 1, 2015 at 4:07 pm Reply
Leah says:

I loved the imagery in this story!

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March 2, 2015 at 6:38 pm Reply
1. jdoublep says:
  
  Thanks for reading and dropping by to leave some kind words.
  
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  March 2, 2015 at 7:08 pm Reply

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