18 thoughts on “H20bituary

  1. What makes this haiku perfect is that when I read it, I can actually see the three layers of water trickling down (first line as the drops of water on the surface, second line as a sheet of paper where its trickling through, and the third where there’s a whole glass of water already filled nearly to the brim). Awesome job.

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